Excellent Essay Writing

Walt: Peer and Self Assess



Task Description
Hi, my name is Caleb, and in this task, I had to look at 3 different writings, and write what I think they could do next time they write. These pieces of writings were Level 3-4 Writings.

Blood

Walt; figure out about the body



Task Description
Hello, my name is Caleb, and welcome to my blog. In this task, I do a task on blood, do some inference, and do a bit more on Animal Testing.

Digestion

Walt: Justify our ideas



Task Description
Hi, my name is Caleb, and in this task, I do a task about Digestions. I also do a poem, more inference, and a task about my viewpoint on animal testing.

Narwhal

Walt: Learn about different ways of living



Task Description
Hi, my name is Caleb, and welcome to my blog. In this task, I write about Narwhal, as they are one of my favorite animals.

My Tree of Life

This is my tree of life. We learnt that in 1835, Charles Darwin discovered a number of animals, and made a theory that all animals are connected, or were connected millions of years ago. The animals that evolved had a better chance of surviving. At the bottom of the tree, there are the things that every animal evolved from.

Italy

Italy is a country in Europe. It has 51 different islands, and the official languages in Italy are Italian and Catalan. Italy was home to Palaeolithic, which were the ancient humans, for about 800’000 years, and was home to modern humans for 40’000 years. The current Population in Italy is about 60 Million people.

Food

Food is an amazing part of Italy. Italy has the best foods in the world. Italy created food we eat everyday. Some of these foods include Lasagna, Fiorentina Steak, and Pizza. There best Pizza is the Neapolitan Pizza. Italians love cuisines. One of the reasons they love it so much is because there cuisines are the best in the world. Some common foods to eat in Italy are Soup and Rice.

Climate

Italy has good climate. When it is summer, the weather is mostly dry and hot. And when it is winter, it is cold and icy. Sometimes, it is so cold in winter that people can’t go outside. In winter, there is lots of snow on the big mountains. The best time to visit Italy in the Spring is April and June, and in the fall it is September and October.

Wildlife

Wildlife is truly fascinating in Italy. In the sea, there are many different animals. On of the most dangerous animals in the waters of Italy are the Great White Shark. But there are also Dolphins, Jellyfish, Seals, and Amazingly, Flamingos! But the land animals are more fascinating. There are great Foxes, Wolfs, Wolverines, and Big Brown Bears! But there are also other cool animals. There are Lynxes, which are like big wild cats, Rabbits, Big Deers, Boars, and Big Goats. There are lots of other animals, but if I tried to cover them all, I could make a book!

Out of all the amazing places in the world, Italy has got to be one of the most popular, and amazing places. From making Pizzas, to big Wolfs, there are so many things that make Italy shine. I really wish I could go to Italy.

My Haiku 3

Walt: Follow the structure of the story

I went to the zoo

I saw interesting things

I love animals

Task Description

This is my 3rd Haiku.

It is about the zoo.

Read it!!